| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/07/11 at 08:42 PM Cold indeed. The imagery in this is just phenomenal, man. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/07/11 at 10:16 PM ...so aptly confusing, as is life's tomorrows. i'm the old ford truck, i too wonder the same thing. still hope for the same things. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/11/11 at 02:23 PM Sounds similar to some nightmares I have! Could be analogous to life. But thank God that can be overcome with our Hope in Christ Jesus, Savior and Lord. "Life is worth the living just because He (Christ)lives."(from gospel song). |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/11/11 at 03:39 PM Stark images. Like watching a silent film. Really great. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/11/11 at 07:10 PM of all the qualities that this poem has going for it, it is the wonderful quality that is at once elusive and all so familiar that is most intriguing and grasped cannot but heighten the mysteries and the allures of the heart to discover the daylight either tripped or eloped with the spoon, who are at present on their honeymoon and will not return soon, neither the daylight to fizzing like sparkling water in our eyes or the spoon returned to the honey jar. alas, both are far removed from home, in the meantime, our fare will be dusk and tart. did I mention this poem has heart? lots. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/11/11 at 09:14 PM This is just so good.Great story= very vivid= wonderful write |
| Posted by Ann Mills on 02/08/11 at 02:51 AM I so enjoy reading your words and hearing the gears in my head creak to life to understand when my heart feels the weight of them. |
