| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/06/11 at 03:52 PM Awesome narrative and introspection. Those first two lines are just perfect, too. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 01/06/11 at 04:47 PM sometimes, maybe, the dream is real ... what then? |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/06/11 at 07:04 PM The title was intriging and the piece was well done/ LOVE the narration. G-d , I wish it really was a dream. I HATE reality. |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 01/10/11 at 04:55 AM BRILLIANT BOY ~ BRILLIANT MAN ~ BRILLIANT WORK!
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| Posted by Stuart Shilton on 01/10/11 at 07:05 AM sometimes i think time isnt real. like its just a construct your mind creates to rationalize your life. i dunno |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/10/11 at 03:59 PM Loved every line of this. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/10/11 at 08:41 PM Good poem Tim. I like the playfulness and leanings towards insantiy. Great minds think alike. I wrote a poem once called Killing Time, inspired by my son's Clinical Depression, and his own struggles with time. It's in my Millennium library if you'd like to check it out sometime. Kudos for the great read! |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 01/13/11 at 07:11 PM aside from the fact that i'm a monkey - i related to those first three lines -- they pulled me in. nicely done. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/14/11 at 08:37 AM The title actually makes this poem work!! Brilliant! |
