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ill wind?

by Charlie Morgan

i know the wind brought it;
all covered in cold air.

i faced the wind, knowing.
Tomorrows are brought by winds.

a new dress for tomorrow;
simplicity in calico and lace.

mayhaps an empty flower-bag-dress;
the moth eaten sleeve-hole fraying.

or the armor of a gentle, strong girl
of 9 grinning innocently at Spongebob.

once i thought everybody was me; i them.
one more change. another; and another.

i am ready for any change the wind brings;
don't know, though, if i can weather it alone.

11/25/2010

Posted on 11/25/2010
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 11/25/10 at 04:29 PM

What if... the windmaker has no intention of allowing us to weather it alone and it's why the ill winds sometimes blow in all our lives... Thankfully, I know we are needful of our apart times too (Isn't that another awesome reason to give thanks?!?) because He did it quite regularly, from what I've read....

Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/27/10 at 07:22 PM

What I love is the way the wind took you, turned you, blew your imagination into tomorrow, around the bend to the place you found that flower-bag dress and the strong girl. As long as you post here, you will not be alone, and I feel blessed to be an autumn leaf wafted up in your fancy and artistry. Very nice piece, buddy.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/28/10 at 06:43 AM

This pome reaches ....to whom? well me and probably all the other lonely souls asking the same questions. I especially like these last lines:i am ready for any change the wind brings; don't know, though, if i can weather it alone. I know I MUST but seem to find it hard....I learned my lesson well.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/10 at 04:31 PM

I'm a long time in commenting on this one. It is a dandy - especially the dress stanzas - unexpected and delightfully visual. New winds seem to blow in someone to share new times. Thank you.

Posted by George Hoerner on 12/09/10 at 12:54 AM

Really good write Charlie. When this was posted I must have had my head buried in the wrong end of the turkey. I've seen the winds blow from coast to coast and most places in between. Sometimes the blow strong sometimes gently but rarely do the stop like your words, they just keep us going.

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