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The Nor' Eastern Cycle

by Anita Mac

The day covers me,
a cool blanket against
the achy turmoil of
all-summer-long.

This is the New England of childhood:
a creamy sort of afternoon.

I sigh a sigh that carries
back to cemeteries,
the sentinels of one-room schoolhouses
across the region,
echoing the sentiment forward.


This is what we do,
this is how we work,
and if we stop—
the Cold will surely have us…

11/03/2010

Posted on 11/03/2010
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/03/10 at 04:06 PM

Indeed. Quick, clever and wonderfully written.

Posted by V. Blake on 11/03/10 at 04:21 PM

I was going to quote the first couple of lines here, then the second, then the third, and all the way to the end. This whole thing is awesome.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/04/10 at 03:43 PM

I like this kind of day, how you embrace it and offer it to me. I would like to read more of "what we do" and "how we work". I like seeing the contrast between the cool blanket and the ever underlying "Cold".

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/09/10 at 10:34 PM

Very nice imagery. Makes me think of New England clam chowder on a winter's afternoon!

Posted by Therese Elaine on 11/10/10 at 04:14 AM

The line, 'a creamy sort of afternoon' is absolutely delectable...this poem has both simplicity and complex richness and I love that you can both admire it as a whole and sink your fingers in and pick out plums...lovely, Anita!

Posted by Therese Elaine on 11/10/10 at 04:14 AM

The line, 'a creamy sort of afternoon' is absolutely delectable...this poem has both simplicity and complex richness and I love that you can both admire it as a whole and sink your fingers in and pick out plums...lovely, Anita!

Posted by Laura Doom on 11/14/10 at 10:49 AM

The living dead, a caution to the dead living. A pleasure to visit your temperate zone...

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/28/10 at 02:28 PM

on this sunny, but wintry like day, this poem blankets me warm and soothing. the sooth and the warmth and the blanket of which I am hesitant to peel.

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 12/10/10 at 08:04 PM

Then I say let if have us, well done!

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