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Autumn in the Appalachians (Haiku)

by Michael Smith


tree-dodging sunbeams
warm my face
dead leaves ride chilly wind

10/21/2010

Author's Note:
"If you're lucky enough to be in the mountains, you're lucky enough." ~unknown

Posted on 10/21/2010
Copyright © 2016 Michael Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/21/10 at 03:25 PM

Sounds good to me.

Posted by George Hoerner on 10/21/10 at 03:51 PM

And I love it!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/10 at 05:01 PM

...good 'un michael.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/29/10 at 10:52 PM

great images

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/05/11 at 08:19 AM

I've not been lucky enough to be in the mountains as much as I like, but I have been lucky enough to be able to read this poem which is as magically alluring and smoky topped.

Posted by Dawn Davidson on 04/20/11 at 05:20 PM

as a fellow mountain walker, and mountain listener, absolutely, enough said.

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 04/08/14 at 05:11 PM

I like this.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/05/15 at 10:22 AM

The warm and the cold of it - I really like the tree-dodging sunbeams.

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