| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 10/05/10 at 01:31 PM A punch in few words, my dear. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/05/10 at 01:52 PM Sharp from start to finish. I love this thing. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 10/05/10 at 06:54 PM I have most certainly missed your poems, Anita. This is like a blunt weapon. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/06/10 at 12:42 AM I love the brevity and the knife-sharp declarations. |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 10/06/10 at 03:33 AM This is shocking the way a stripped down cadaver is, post-autopsy, the pain of reminiscence before you bury the body...really wonderfully done, Anita. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 10/07/10 at 12:02 AM like an anvil of crusted guts...ugh, but mmm. pretty in a sensationally heartbreaking way. i love a lot of words in here...it's a short little list of everything that makes you want to cry and choke. love it. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/08/10 at 04:32 PM Like someone just walked over my grave, chilling well worded message to some poor soul who did ya wrong. Thought provoking read. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/11/10 at 03:44 AM Delightfully clever and entertaining. Nicely done. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/22/10 at 04:10 PM ...but your fingers are still doing the business...
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