| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/14/10 at 10:13 PM ...george, another kicker. i'm behind you on the 8ball of the future. cool write. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 08/25/10 at 12:05 PM Then you have no time to lose -- keep on trekking George :> |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/26/10 at 02:16 AM Very nice George. I like how this poem's train of thought meanders down the page. Sure can relate to it also. |
| Posted by Erin Eymard on 09/24/10 at 04:01 PM What a wonderful attitude! Time be gone, indeed! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/15/10 at 11:12 PM I like the sense of acceptance and humility and then the climactic surrender in the last stanza. This feels both well-aged and fresh. Thanks, George. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/18/10 at 01:35 AM I relate to the desire for time to begone myself too. Ride that future wave, dear poet. |
