| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/22/10 at 06:30 PM Paddle "oar" swim faster, I think I hear banjos!
Fun stuff CharMin. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/22/10 at 07:11 PM ...good 'un CharMin. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/22/10 at 11:35 PM ... wonderful..... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/24/10 at 06:21 PM Up a creek - eek! Sorry the paddle skedaddled, Charlie. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/25/10 at 12:04 AM that's the third most important part of the boat, right behind the boat and the crew. haha |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/25/10 at 11:53 AM I like the combination of whimsical and serious tones here Charles. Also, to take something so seemingly insignificant as a paddle, and giving it such importance. Always look forward to something new from you; thanks for delivering! :o) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/26/10 at 12:16 AM Guess you need to skedaddle to the store for another Seattle paddle so your head doesn't get so sore! LOL!! Enjoyed the humor! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/27/10 at 12:41 AM Great word play! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 05/22/11 at 04:28 PM Sounds like you are up the river without a paddle! |