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barefoot bandit

by Kristina Woodhill

in my young bare feet
shop the world, then steal away
seeking shoes that fit

07/11/2010

Posted on 07/11/2010
Copyright © 2020 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/11/10 at 10:57 PM

if my feet were tough enough i'd be in nothing but bare feet, though that might make it difficult to get service in some places. i like it!

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 07/12/10 at 12:01 AM

liking this one

Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/12/10 at 12:17 AM

I like the double meaning in the second line and the feeling I get from the entire poem.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/12/10 at 12:44 AM

I HATE shies, My toes curl and I wear sandals whenever possible.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/12/10 at 12:46 AM

S-H-O-E-S....Sorry!!

Posted by Jo Halliday on 07/12/10 at 11:43 AM

beautiful write; such innocence it evokes, and yet such audacity. only three lines, and so much in them

Posted by George Hoerner on 07/12/10 at 12:15 PM

Hey Kristina, good write. But I've never been one for being barefoot unless I'm in the water and then I can't swim with shoes on.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/12/10 at 04:48 PM

May be a case of too smart for his own good...but I like your breezy 'Ku....

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/15/10 at 11:34 PM

A pleasantly surprising find and unique interpretation in the wake of a recent event that went viral in the media. Well done!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/24/10 at 10:03 PM

Fun Kris...CharMin

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