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rumour

by Maria Massarella

indelible it sprawls
across the careless page
serrating lines of thoughts
impervious
that in their break
-ing hold captive
the breath and I
intoxicated by the tell tale
fragrance
would immortalize with words
what simply is
eternal







*m.a




06/30/2010

Posted on 06/30/2010
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/30/10 at 03:38 PM

Just lovely as hell.

Posted by George Hoerner on 06/30/10 at 09:04 PM

Very nice write lady. I bet I could write a book if I had written down all the rumors told about me.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/01/10 at 01:26 AM

wow

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/01/10 at 08:10 PM

Just such a perfect word-following-perfect-word experience for this reader. Thank you.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/03/10 at 01:42 AM

Well, I was with you till that last word... then I thought about it and this is what it says to me: the rumor cuts, but there is something deeper and fragrant with spirit. Thanks Maria.

Posted by A. Reed on 02/07/11 at 07:31 PM

Lovely indeed. Great work.

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