Sunrisen (haiku) by A. Paige White Sunrise strokes shave this neck of a day light like a razor 06/30/2010 Author's Note: This edge I'm living cuts away every mapping shadow Posted on 06/30/2010 Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/30/10 at 05:56 PM Beautiful Haiku- complimented with georgeous scenery Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/01/10 at 10:37 PM What a cutting and novel representation of sunrise. With it dreams fade quickly and the realities assert themselves. Clever and awakening! Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/20/12 at 03:04 PM what a perfect analogy. beautiful. it is not oft that the sunrise is not strapped sufficient to give me a close shave. when its blade is dull one needing a shave needs be brave. nick. nicks. st. nick. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)