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Sunrisen (haiku)
by A. Paige White
Sunrise strokes
shave this neck of a day
light like a razor 06/30/2010 Author's Note: This edge I\'m living cuts away every mapping shadow
Posted on 06/30/2010
Copyright © 2026 A. Paige White
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/30/10 at 05:56 PM Beautiful Haiku- complimented with georgeous scenery |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/01/10 at 10:37 PM What a cutting and novel representation of sunrise. With it dreams fade quickly and the realities assert themselves. Clever and awakening! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/20/12 at 03:04 PM what a perfect analogy. beautiful. it is not oft that the sunrise is not strapped sufficient to give me a close shave. when its blade is dull one needing a shave needs be brave. nick. nicks. st. nick. |
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