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Sunrisen (haiku)

by A. Paige White


Sunrise strokes
shave this neck of a day
light like a razor

06/30/2010

Author's Note: This edge I'm living cuts away every mapping shadow

Posted on 06/30/2010
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/30/10 at 05:56 PM

Beautiful Haiku- complimented with georgeous scenery

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/01/10 at 10:37 PM

What a cutting and novel representation of sunrise. With it dreams fade quickly and the realities assert themselves. Clever and awakening!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/20/12 at 03:04 PM

what a perfect analogy. beautiful. it is not oft that the sunrise is not strapped sufficient to give me a close shave. when its blade is dull one needing a shave needs be brave. nick. nicks. st. nick.

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