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Hello... I see... And with seeing ask

by A. Paige White


why did you stop
the channel I watch
full of oil, once gain
now only filled and flowing with pain
the pain of pregnancy
full term, delivery


the words I review bring tears to eyes that read, red
why was the pupil designed with an iris
colors various, refined

why does the oil that annoints our travels
pollute our gulf, as you know of the deep
the one, the bridge of gulfs

more importantly, I query will,
will this pain end
in I will, or eye will



06/30/2010

Author's Note: This gulf of salty waters flows my veins, pollute saline while I can but ask when, Lord, when, will your thumb
plunge deepest into the abyss of failure we all share.... mercy me, Lord, Mercy Me! & mine, mercy we, Lord, Mercy Wee...
WARNING: This disturbing video will break your heart
and make you cry.

Posted on 06/30/2010
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/01/10 at 08:12 PM

Paige- love the piece and the scenery!

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/03/10 at 02:21 AM

Gees, I do feel the pain and admire you for describing the very experience of observing it. And your author's note too woke me up. How are we all part of this failure? Your poem prompts me to plunge deeper. Thanks, Ali.

Posted by James Zealy on 07/03/10 at 12:47 PM

you live it you feel it there is no more to say.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/19/13 at 02:57 PM

a powerful ode to say the least. who knows but one day such question as you toss in the waters of infinity will have a fish on the end of it, pure as any fish as was ever reeled in.

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