| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 06/22/10 at 12:29 AM I will never quite think of doing laundry in the same way ever again. Good write lady. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/22/10 at 03:29 PM Chaotic, fun write. I liked it a lot. |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/22/10 at 03:30 PM *grin* Some things should never go out of style, eh? |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/22/10 at 05:22 PM ...what a treatise on linebrea
kage. a creation of a fun-ride
in the way you drop us off at each
ledge, to make meaning...i see, feel, wonder about[that vibrating before you knew what they were] A GENIUS LINE. when you discovered that, when that line came to mind, were there lightning bolts and all...what platform to step on to from the above line...'leaned myself against'...those lil' feelings and thoughts about the world, i.e. 'what's it all about Alfie? kind of thingee, you pegged on of those delightful feeling moments...i'm envious. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/24/10 at 07:01 PM LOL! At first I thought this was just an exercise in machinery descriptiveness, and then I read that second part, and it all made well worded and clever sense. Very courageous Linda. Well done! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 06/26/10 at 03:54 AM i always thought doing wash was more fun with company... hahaha |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/26/10 at 08:00 PM Enjoyed the word and line breaks in this and delighted in "the vibrations". Cleverly marrying the everyday with that which moves us basically. Thank you. |
