| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 06/18/10 at 08:59 PM it seems the beach has a greater sense of intimacy than the ocean could ever hope to achieve =) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/18/10 at 09:21 PM Wow. Now this is one more sensual (sandsual?) poem! Breaks my heart that it's unlikely my children, possibly even my grandchildren will never again get to experience our state's beaches like I was privileged to. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/18/10 at 09:29 PM ...sensual, yes. and on continent after continent tis a daily occurrence, the ocean needs a cigarette. nahahaha, good write. i like the narrative, the breadth. comprehensive. touches all. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/19/10 at 02:41 AM I enjoyed this conversation very much. |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 06/22/10 at 02:38 PM This is slinky, saturated and it clings to the mind like sweat-soaked limbs and seaweed caresses...and the metaphor -oh the metaphor contained within -simply...dare I say it...oceanic... |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/23/10 at 12:38 AM Awhhhhhh...this is so good! And as a person who just 30 minutes ago returned from staring for hours at the surf....I'm an expert. Really enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 06/24/10 at 06:00 AM this piece has taken me for quite a ride! wonderful imagery, and a very interesting way to put it! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/24/10 at 02:11 PM Nice to see I'm not the only one with ocean on his mind. I really like the extended complex metaphor at work here George. Congrats on hitting #1! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/02/10 at 10:47 PM I love the way you make the waves and the beach lovers! Sensually written with vivid imagery. The banter between the two is fantastic. |
