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Tides of Teriyaki Tempo

by Alison McKenzie

The live music at The Drift Inn is rich,
Thick with a beauty and magic
Rare to these ears,
An unexpected delight
On my ocean journey,
Decadent infusion of much needed serenity.

In keeping with the gentleness of the moment,
I delicately raise a dinner mushroom to my lips.
In keeping with my own clumsy, unintentional irreverence,
It falls with a splash back into my hot-n-sour soup,
And I twinkle in the reverie.

Still, the rhythm comes,
Melodic from a guitar not quite picked.
A grin frolics into the musician’s repose,
Transporting the hungry patrons
To new heights of refreshment,
Raining into their animated shimmers
Like giggling drops of heaven.

Lilted melodies drift out into the overcast maritime,
Dissolving the storms into a sparkling tonic
Of tapping drops that make their way
Back to his fingers and the strings
While the ocean applauds into the sand.

While I wander in the various bits of ballad,
My oyster crackers become soggy
But barely seem to notice in
The trade of neglect for refrain.

Tony embraces his guitar,
Courtier close, stroking the strings,
An impromptu choreography,
Adoration flaming.
His tender arias dance on the chords,
Tune tapping the melodies to ether,
Bathing my senses in the euphoric nectar
Of melodic apogee and
The sweet harmony
Of happy chatter with brilliant strain.

The various waitresses involuntarily sway in
Instinctive familiarity.
Some of the men slip momentarily,
Heads nodding in independent resonance
From their eating fingers.
Other feet keep their own time, too.

I scoop the forgotten mushroom into my mouth,
Squishing the spongy fruit to teeth
In a delightful burst of teriyaki tempeh.
I buy 900 CD’s and tip him a ten,
Well greased from the marionberry daiquiris,
Not sticking to my seat,
But floating in the sweet soup of harmonies.

Tony Kaltenerg’s offering
At The Drift Inn –
Yachats, Oregon
May 30, 2010.

06/02/2010

Author's Note: Title assistance provided courtesy of Adam - :-)

Posted on 06/02/2010
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adam Dyson on 06/02/10 at 07:49 PM

This may well be my favourite of your poems this year. The detail is as delicious as the taste of Teriyake and the smell of salt air that this leaves me with. Beautiful framing of a perfect moment.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/03/10 at 01:21 PM

You do so artfully capture the moments. What a delight to read your poem and share these moments of joy. And then when I read that you were on the Oregon coast, it even increased the pleasure. I love the way you describe the movement of bodies and body parts in sync with the music. Delicious, Alison.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/07/10 at 07:16 PM

Marvelous descriptions of this experience and this place. Instead of ho-hum reviews in travel guides, I can imagine a whole book of places visited, breathed in, and written down by Alison McKenzie. I really like that you included the name, place, date at the end.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/08/10 at 01:06 AM

you write travelogues so utterly well and poetically, Alison...I am in awe

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