| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 06/02/10 at 04:37 AM I loved it. I know who's are who's lines. I miss collabing with him. Speaking of collabing, you me woman! |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 06/03/10 at 12:30 AM How could I have guessed the Title? Hmmmm..? :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/03/10 at 03:48 AM You had my imagination working overtime. I am glad you gave me permission with the "explicit" flag. Congrats to you both for the multiplication effect of your creativity. Graphic and juicy! Good one. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/04/10 at 03:01 AM This poem is very tactile... it overwhelms the senses with vibrant colors, honey flavored thighs, bone, and blood. Yes. This will leave a stain on the reader. Dual voices give it that 'at odds' with oneself feel... great work. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/04/10 at 02:10 PM Yep, what Max said. Otherwise....speechless. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/04/10 at 04:20 PM Sizzling and unique...sensual to the extreme and simply awesome...kudos to the poet(s)! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/05/10 at 12:58 PM for me every ode is a field upon which to graze and as I am oft a famished and unholy cow and a lame horse in the best of times, I find this to be an unsuspected and pleasant surprise in the wide field of our expression, a salt lick upon which to ruminate and salivate persistence. |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 07/06/10 at 01:09 AM Nicely done....one last mouth to mouth benediction....magdalen tears. Great collaboration. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/29/12 at 06:18 PM This is an awesome collab with Sean! I loved doing a couple with him, too. I would love to do one with you. Some of these lines are just fantastic. Highest marks all around. |
