| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/15/10 at 05:28 AM Welcome back! Thanks for the chuckle. Saw your post on the forum, what a comeback! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 05/15/10 at 12:57 PM Cute and this had the possibility of going in so many directions from anatomical to philosophical. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 05/16/10 at 03:42 AM You've done it again, made me laugh till my side hurts. Thanks, for making my day. |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 05/16/10 at 11:44 AM Hahaha, great read Max! Looking forward too more... and soon I hope :) |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/16/10 at 12:30 PM That's the recipe for disaster then :> I can't wait for scrambled egos and mashed potentates... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/17/10 at 03:43 PM Awesome, awesome stuff. That first stanza is just flat-out amazing. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/24/10 at 11:45 AM what is love, but some undiscovered country to seek out and claim as one's own? something to enjoy whilst making such claims and discovery and suffering the pure consequences of which you have described so delightfully surreal. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/04/10 at 03:10 PM "Stewed arrogance" - what a hoot! This makes me grateful that I have not seen parts of me in anyone's recipe books. Interesting to think of our minds as recipe books - which they are - or at least parts of our minds. Eating your words has been a tasty post-breakfast treat. Thanks for your genius, Max. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/23/10 at 11:13 PM consider my synapses toast. |
