|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/11/10 at 09:29 PM|
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/12/10 at 05:22 PM|
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/13/10 at 08:27 PM|
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/14/10 at 02:11 AM|
I have to come back now that I've calmed down - I really like the use of the double helix as an object on which one can race, especially the S3 jab at the friend becoming God, and the Neanderthals' economy of words upon seeing the newcomers. Well done.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 05/14/10 at 10:20 PM|
...and I thought: "Who would want to win that race? [so inhumanely human -- makes you want to shed a tier :]
Good to see you writing again Max...
(and when was this potd?)
|Posted by Wendy Sparling on 05/19/10 at 05:27 AM|
Congratulations on your POTD. Welcome back! Oh, and your poetry rocks to.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/19/10 at 02:54 PM|
Good one Max, glad to see you posting again...CharMin
|Posted by Angela Cotterman on 05/19/10 at 03:36 PM|
Ha! LOVE the final stanza and end word!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/19/10 at 03:48 PM|
welcome back Max and presenting us this POTD which speaks beyond volumes and is a tribute to your fine art.
|Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/10 at 04:14 PM|
Welcome back and congratulations on POTD, you jerk!