Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/02/10 at 05:54 AM OMG Maria, the strength of this piece is absolutely stunning! Honors! |
Posted by George Hoerner on 05/03/10 at 01:25 PM I love it lady. Well done! |
Posted by Julie Adams on 05/03/10 at 08:17 PM THIS IS FAB!!! I adore it, the idea, and you! An instant fav for me :) peace, poems, and all the trimmings to you ;) ~jewels xo |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 05/06/10 at 05:55 AM This is devilishly clever and witty. Loved it! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/06/10 at 11:17 PM Very nicely put Maria. Clever, serious. Love the final warning in the closing lines. Goes to my favourites. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/07/10 at 05:30 PM Ha! This is terrific! What a positive force here. Thank you. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/12/10 at 02:59 PM ...maria, ditto on well said. quite a spojourn o' feelings...good 'un. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 05/12/10 at 03:20 PM ... congrats on POTD!!! |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/12/10 at 04:20 PM Congrats on POTD!This piece shows alot of inner strangth and self esteem. Love every word! |
Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 04:47 PM Damn; this is just wonderful! And, so truly spoken; who needs someone who isn't in it for the real deal, you know? I LOVE IT! |