you have found a sad, searing, utterly memorable metaphor, Mel...the simplicity and profundity intermingled make this a significant additon to your library..not only of poetry, but of life.

Great write Melissa although sad I'd say it ends not with wimper but maybe a new start. And why are 7's such an oft reminder of these breakings of the vows?

There is a lot of pain in this write but I'm glad that the ending gives light to the bigger picture. Best of luck to you dear.

I like the past tense that is replaced by your reclaiming your independence. It helps me to read about sad events that others are able to work through. Thank you.