| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Therese Elaine on 01/25/10 at 07:36 PM Oooooh...I love this -I have been that girl (sans long chestnut hair) -and oh, the wondering that does occur!!! |
| Posted by V. Blake on 01/25/10 at 08:04 PM There are few poems I would categorize as "adorable." This is one of them. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/25/10 at 08:15 PM Was she ready for lunch?? Cute write lady. Very enjoyable. |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/26/10 at 06:39 AM And this truly has its own perfect ending. A spectacularly solid write, Melissa. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/26/10 at 02:02 PM the image in the first line sparkles! my fave: "a shoe dangles curiously from her toe as the words skip and spill from the pages onto her lap." As always, you capture a moment like no other! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/26/10 at 05:12 PM Most enjoyable descriptions of this whole scene and a romantic side note that adds to the story. Thank you. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 01/26/10 at 08:19 PM Whatever the denouement, the ending is fine as it is...a 3-D piece with a light touch; should be a best-seller :> |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/27/10 at 05:27 AM I love how you turned this beautiful piece about literature into literature. Very clever. Makes me want to pick up a good book and get lost and find something I'm looking for. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/27/10 at 01:51 PM the exquisite detail of this piece feels more like a canvas or short film on the page...ur words paint the moving image we see, stellar write poet...the pleasure all ours, kudos...peace, jewels |
