| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/23/09 at 02:00 AM I love it Vince. I have an old record with a description on it of what the archeologists found in America in, I think, the year 3000. It is really quite good. If I can get it digitized I'll send it to you. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/23/09 at 05:45 AM Your opening line kinda contradicts the title. But anything with a Pink Floyd reference is good in my book. I seen the title and it instantly made me think of Beck though. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/24/09 at 09:34 PM ...been off for a while, cowboy this is good...you still got it bubba, you still got it. i'll not reference anything except my 63yrs. of avocational interest in the un-understandable--human existence, and why?. touche! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/25/09 at 04:14 PM Oh, you cosmic observer, equal parts realist and troubadour. This is packed with meaning and I love the title. The world turns in its universe, just as we find our little piece of it on our little turntables. Well done, young man... may you have a year full of equally brilliant poems. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 12/26/09 at 01:53 AM u n f o r g e t t a b l e ! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/26/09 at 04:26 PM I like the images in this very much, and especially looking back to an actual turntable as the means of what may come next. cool. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 12/27/09 at 07:48 PM very cool metaphorical concepts create this work...and i just love it.....i wish i had read it a little sooner but sometimes i am like a turtle...this is a keeper and going in the my favs |
| Posted by Amie Golda on 12/28/09 at 09:26 AM I love the ending, some dark humor there. The middle's got great rythm too and the beginning is like a sonnet with its thesis statement making a claim for the poem's thought. Well done :) |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/29/09 at 03:39 AM All I can say is, this goes straight into my Faves. Do not Pass Go. Do not collect $200! Brilliant |
