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False Heart
by Peggie EngZorro has a false heart, should had seen it from the very
start..
Cloked in a cape and a mask of lies, beyond it a demon
resides..
The mask has been thrashed, the cloak has been slashed,
Free at last....
12/03/2009
Author's Note: Buyer Beware...
Posted on 12/04/2009
Copyright © 2024 Peggie Eng
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 12/04/09 at 05:38 AM I really like the first and third lines, but I feel like the middle one disrupts the rhythm. The idea is still a strong one, but I can't help but feel you could word it better. Cool regardless, though. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/12/09 at 06:16 AM Buyer beware indeed. Sometimes the mask does not a good heart hide. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/24/09 at 03:26 PM this poem is so real, so lovely, and so intuitive, and great forecaster to some great lesson for all who have a heart to learn. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/26/13 at 02:41 PM From start to that last "last" this is full of revelation, realization, and action packed. I like it a lot. |
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