| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 11/29/09 at 06:28 AM This is so many different kinds of awesome that I can't even count them. I wasn't expecting anything too mind-blowing when I read the title, but I was definitely wrong about that. I'd rate it higher if the site let me, but adding it to my favorites will have to suffice. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 11/29/09 at 03:29 PM speechless. as I often am when reading your work. you and I, in my opinion, share very similar strengths with our words. I'd love to collab with you, if ever we could. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/29/09 at 05:18 PM Awesome! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/30/09 at 02:40 AM The creative format takes a good poem and makes it a great one! Very entertaining! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/30/09 at 05:12 PM That penultimate line is sheer genius. I too like the creative line spacing and how it makes gaps in the poem reflective of the gaps you allude to in the poem. This poem is profound and thought-provoking. It makes me want to go inward to examine myself and what frozenness might be there. I am with Vince in his praise. Thanks, Jason. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/30/09 at 10:51 PM I've always loved how you date your pieces then pick a subject to title them as well. This piece is exception. I definetly think your format and play on the words makes it much more touching. |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 12/01/09 at 06:37 AM It makes me think of "Silent Snow, Secret Snow." |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/21/14 at 03:51 PM Excellent to see this as POTD! |
