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Peeling

by Wendy Sparling

Winter onions spray-
sparkling poignant particles
two rivers flow tears!

11/17/2009

Posted on 11/18/2009
Copyright © 2025 Wendy Sparling

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/18/09 at 03:40 AM

Ha! This really made me laugh out loud! How true how true! Great write Wendy!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/23/09 at 11:55 PM

This made me smile, knowing those two rivers all too well. Well expressed dear!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/24/09 at 03:40 AM

A gem that sprinkles smiles, Wendy...lovely write!

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/24/09 at 04:12 AM

This was an "appealing" piece of Ku that immediately paints a picture all of us have felt.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/09 at 03:55 PM

Very clever! Great word choices. Thank you!

Posted by A. Paige White on 11/24/09 at 06:33 PM

Great write to peel what you feel and reel us into two rushing rivers with you. I can almost smell this ku. It's on the tip of my nose...

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/24/09 at 10:17 PM

Fun write Wen....CharMin

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