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Out of Reach
by Kerowyn Rose
sweet sweet girl's
got a crush on you.
she's a jewel,
and you know how
her hands will feel
before they map
the hard line of
your chin - you
know the warmth
of her lips before
they touch each
eyelid, and somehow
her tongue tastes of
starshine and mint
julep. she's got
your daydreams
running on repeat,
replaying every sugary
moan and each
soft breath against
the crook of your neck.
what will you do with
this girl you cannot
touch, but with your
kindness? what will you
do with the girl you
cannot make love to, but
with your diamond eyes?
10/07/2009 Posted on 10/08/2009
Copyright © 2024 Kerowyn Rose
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/08/09 at 06:16 PM Wow, I think this is fabulous. It is such a tight package, and contains so many good ideas:"your daydreams running on repeat", "starshine", and more...love this..potd suggested. A fav. Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/13/09 at 11:32 PM You make this daydream come to life. "starshine and mint julep" - yum! Thank you. |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 10/14/09 at 01:52 PM Beautifully written, somehow it feels as if there should be more to come, something more to be said. A sweetly aching poem! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/14/09 at 03:15 PM Very nice to see this as POTD today! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/14/09 at 07:03 PM Congrats on a terrific potd! |
| Posted by William Brunk on 10/14/09 at 08:16 PM wonderful write...captured such a moment, thoughts that have gone through my very mind, vivid and clever, |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/15/09 at 04:00 AM A fun read and one that brings to mind my daydreams of my youth when spying someone "Out of Limits". |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 10/17/09 at 08:18 PM Very nice! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 10/18/09 at 05:55 PM Sorry, but I simply loved every breath of this!!! Amazing through and through. Instant favorite! ~jewels |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/21/09 at 02:35 PM This is just beautiful!! Favorites! |
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