Tick, Tock

by Jennifer Lawrence

Frantic Pacing
Longing, Waiting
Trying hard to pass the time
Urgent Thinking
shallow breathing
Did the wall clock just rewind?
Dying, Living
Waiting, Giving
Pining for the love that's mine


Posted on 10/04/2009
Copyright © 2020 Jennifer Lawrence

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Timothy Burns on 10/11/09 at 08:18 PM

I love this poem! It sings in my ear! Lovely!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/31/09 at 01:03 AM

A solid tick, tock beat to this - most effective. I really liked that question in the middle.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/20 at 07:19 AM

Captivating, great poem...congrats on POTD!

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