On the lighter side by H.M StevensOn the lighter side
I escaped with you
On the lighter side
You stood as a rock
On the lighter side
We stuffed ourselves
On the lighter side
The door sways
A vibration in the airspace
The knob not even reached
09/30/2009 Author's Note: Inspired by mg
Posted on 09/30/2009 Copyright © 2024 H.M Stevens
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/01/09 at 11:30 PM I like the idea of the door swinging without touching the knob, except through the activities that preceeded it. Supernatural. |
Posted by JD Clay on 10/05/09 at 02:55 PM On the lighter side, this discreet and sparing piece offers just enough information to set the readers mind in action and lets the imagination finish off the poem. Good stuff! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/12/15 at 06:47 PM Definitely mystery created here. I can't help but ponder what happened "on the darker side". You have a gift for revealing just enough. |
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