| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/23/09 at 01:38 PM ...i bet the one you're looking at does, this is really really cool shannon. a tribute to the life-giving things on this planet, ahhh that we haven't killed yet...great write. |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 09/24/09 at 03:28 AM Busy bee. What a gift of observation |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/24/09 at 12:47 PM "Nine clovers to the right of contemplation"
A refreshing swirl of creativity, this poem, and I am in full mesmerizing admiration! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/24/09 at 03:40 PM Great last line! Reminds me of the Scripture that says God even sees the sparrow that falls!
Lovely poem. |
| Posted by Timothy Burns on 09/26/09 at 09:24 PM we as humans can be so meticulously unaware of everything around us. We need to work on that.
A wonderful poem! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/01/09 at 11:20 PM And a stuningly vividly picture this paints for us the readers. I thought it was going to be a love poem when I first saw the title. |
