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Happy Anniversary Baby

by Shannon McEwen

Has it been seven hundred
and thirty days
Since I said I do?

Or one thousand eighteen
Hundred and thirteen days
Of your incredible warmth

And thirty nine seconds
ago when you reminded me
Why I mean “I love you”

And every second after
My soul rejoices
For the love of you




09/22/2009

Author's Note: cheesy love poem - I suck at sentiment:P

Posted on 09/22/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/23/09 at 02:23 AM

...shannon, i align this with a Me that lives somewhere...he too can't write mushy stuff, yet like you, tip-toe on the top of the surface, dipping just enough to get our tops of our toes wet, sooo we CAN be felt, i feel this pome in the loving way you meant, and i am a counter too, so join me or i join you.

Posted by Jared Fladeland on 09/23/09 at 04:59 AM

As someone only married for a little over a year this resonates. Ha. I liked it

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/24/09 at 04:22 PM

Wonderfully personal and sentimental! Gets to the heart! Helps keep the flame of love bright!

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/03/11 at 05:04 AM

Awwww!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/23/11 at 04:42 PM

Shannon I detect not an inkling of cheesiness here. I love it, as a matter of fact. I love these wee odes to love. I lost my love, I wish I still had her in my life to write such lovely odes as this.

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