|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/15/09 at 06:29 PM|
...joe, i like the rhythm, rhyme, and the position/perspective...touche!
|Posted by A. Paige White on 09/16/09 at 06:38 PM|
I like all that too, same as Chaz, and I adore the message. Today (another capital T) is the day of salvation. Enjoyed this.
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/17/09 at 02:24 PM|
Your theology resonates and your poem penetrates... makes its way to the Heart of the matter from so many directions like the Medicine Wheel. The North of rebirth, the South of a past needing healing, the East of tender new growth, the West in the beloved's eye, the Up of transcendence. You took me into my own journey and honored me by allowing me into yours.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/17/09 at 08:17 PM|
Well done Joe. Welcome to Pathetic....CharMin
|Posted by Erik Jensen on 09/18/09 at 12:30 AM|
I enjoyed this one - though I have to admit the "Really Real" makes me think of the teen book that just came out. Thanks for removing that thought from my mind.
I really enjoy the rhythm of this. Welcome to pathetic.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/19/09 at 02:59 AM|
Very nice message and a beloved poem!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/21/09 at 12:48 AM|
In this life Truth (Christ) means everything. And yes, we see God's creative spirit in all of life. On the Earth "the future is mist, the past is gone". But there is Eternity where Truth fully resides! Philosophical and challenging.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/25/10 at 02:06 AM|
I like the use of the phrase "really real", its repetition, and especially the emphasis on what we have in the now.