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From the Comfort of Matrimony
by Shannon McEwenIn hazy shadows of three am
Warm, sleepy body rolls,
Meets warm, sleepy body
Automatic reaction
A hand snakes out
Reaches for a nipple
Before going lax
fatigue fights need
And the crescent moon
Dips away
From the honey
And spoons the cow
09/11/2009 Posted on 09/11/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shannon McEwen
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/11/09 at 04:04 PM Hmmmm... you awaken me with this sensual imagery... I like the word and letter choice - all of the o's are evocative and almost erotic. Well done, Shannon. |
| Posted by James Zealy on 09/14/09 at 06:21 AM Sensual and subtle very nice and welcome to Pathetic. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/14/09 at 09:39 PM ...shannon i will keep this secret; and it was nice to get this loveletter? and you hide it in plain sight, ingenious!...this is one scenario, and a very spot-on one...you describe a reality that is...a real. |
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