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Undressing my love

by Shannon McEwen

Underneath the stress
Lays somewhere
in-between

These breasts
Covered by flesh
Encircled by bone

Is the heart that
Still skips a beat
When lip to lip

And hip to hip
Love is made
And encased

Underneath this dress
Somewhere
in-between.

09/10/2009

Posted on 09/11/2009
Copyright © 2026 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 09/11/09 at 01:35 PM

oh yeah. I really enjoyed this! Intimacy of all sorts make life worth living. Welcome aboard the Pathetic steam ship! (some of us are full of hot air, I'm a prime example) I loved your bio!

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/14/09 at 07:12 AM

I needed a cold shpower after reading this. well done and welcome to pathetic Shannon!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/14/09 at 09:34 PM

...too cool, too cool, rather too hot, pass them cigarettes tony, i need one after a cold shower, errrah, thanks shannon.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/02/09 at 03:56 AM

Ah! What a wonderful reliever of stress! I also like the idea of love being encased somewhere in between the physical aspects of romance. Good write, Shannon.

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