| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 09/08/09 at 03:07 AM Written very well. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/08/09 at 05:43 AM Hi Peter, what a wonderfully compelling piece. It makes me look back at a time when we often went to the coast. Your lines pull me back to those foggy mornings I would walk the beach and everything was so surreal and the foghorns in the mist. MMMMMMMMMM. Nice! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 09/08/09 at 02:22 PM I completely enjoyed this piece... reminded me of an old Bogart & Bacall Movie. Excellent visual. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/08/09 at 05:53 PM I love this Peter. It ia like a dream on paper. Very nicely done! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 09/09/09 at 05:23 PM absolutely fantastic! congrats on potd! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/09/09 at 10:38 PM
Mmmmmmmmmmm
Mmmmmmmmmmm
ethereal bliss
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/09/09 at 11:11 PM Well, I love a mystery and the sea and you have combined them beautifully here. It stands me still, quite frankly, and I can clearly hear that fog horn as I wait. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/10/09 at 06:45 PM Spooky stuff Peter; aptly expressed with just the right amount of tension. Here's a little OOOOOOOHHHHHH t'go with your Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. |
