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animated life
by Jared FladelandWhen you were little did you ever make
An animated cartoon in the corner of your textbook?
Think, each page was a fleshed out moment,
Filled with details of that particular
Space and time.
It is not until you go back,
Flip through the pages,
That you see the progression of a life.
God didn't create the world in six days.
It was six pages. 08/29/2009 Posted on 08/29/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 08/29/09 at 04:28 PM well said. a single page could take days to perfect. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/30/09 at 06:26 PM Your poem caused me to think that this is the way it is with people. God created them in a similar pattern, but each one is a little different from page to page - animating the species and our lives. Thanks for the inspiration. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/02/09 at 04:31 PM "each page was a fleshed out moment" - I like this. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 09/03/09 at 03:08 PM very contemplative, and it would be interesting to see what everyone else's animation would look like. smh |
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