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What I Found When I Went Rummaging

by Ken Harnisch

It’s not good to go rummaging through your poems
I find jewels among the cartons there
That cause me to sit in lovely silence
And forget the life I’m supposed to live.

I am surprised I hadn’t seen this one before
Or having seen it, and not believed it was
Meant for me, read in wounded envy
Wondering who could Stir
In you such beautiful words.

I left a rating, I think, which is rare of me;
But a comment for a poem so lovely
Would have betrayed what was then
My utter lack of insight. Of course
Now I see
I was he and he and he to whom
You referred, but such is
The damaged life that only
Hindsight opens blinded eyes

So I read you again, years later, and
Saw myself as you saw me. And
Knowing that you alone had caught
What I wanted most to be
Was no surprise, when I gave it thought.
But the follow-up was to know that had
It not been for you, there might be nothing
And all that you made me would have been sealed
With masking tape in these same cartons
To gather dust

We made no promises then
Not even continuance was assured
And yet, in small, strange ways
We endure. Our passions are
Unspoken now. Some are wisps on the wind,
More ethereal than real.
And yet, and yet…
In the quiet dialogues is
Sometimes still that poetry
We both wrote in the long-ago
In the silence of the night
In the caverns of the heart.

08/04/2009

Posted on 08/04/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/04/09 at 03:37 PM

This is incredibly moving - a lovely flow to this revelation and your reaction to your realization. Thank you. "but such is The damaged life that only Hindsight opens blinded eyes" - lines we can all feel.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/04/09 at 06:28 PM

I agree with Kristina, this is a very moving poem. And the way you express your realizations really draws in the reader; almost like we become the writer. You can almost feel the tangible emotions with which this was written. Really quite a stirring poem Ken.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/04/09 at 08:45 PM

...i never expected this turn, twas serendipitous...i print and delete, carefully[for me, yukyuk] because of the phenomenon of which you speak...some are crunchable to the file 13, yet some are jewels needing shining...i am either off or on but i loved the way you were two, the one now looking w/ all the growth and changes that do occur and and the one who read/wrote this/that some time ago.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/06/09 at 01:08 PM

moved to weeping
this is a whisper, a breath,
sadness blends with gratefulness
like a precious secret kept in hush, shared just by a faint watercolor blushed in holiness.

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