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Nightmares vs. Hymns

by Glenn Currier

When I woke in panic
his hands on my back
his brown teeth gigantic
his ax poised to hack.

Feeling trees bare and barkless
in hell of the night
We are born from darkness
and clothed in the light.

When nightmares crawl the question’s why
brain cells produce these humours
what hand or voice or cruel reply
fears or shame-filled rumors?

The morn awakes the larks extol
his is the call that’s ringing
It finds an echo in my soul--
How can I keep from singing?

 

08/02/2009

Author's Note:

How powerful are the unconscious feelings and images that dominate our dreams - sometimes I think: "This is what hell must be like." It sometimes takes me a few minutes awake to talk myself out of the feelings and back into my reality, and sometimes, like today, hearing two hymns in church, I have help. The rhythm scheme is odd, but I was determined to match the hymn entries (in italics). The two hymns: "River of Glory" and "How Can I Keep from Singing."

Posted on 08/02/2009
Copyright © 2025 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/03/09 at 06:02 AM

We either eat in dreams the "custard of the day" or seemingly our dreams drench us in the senses, and then the senses step us again into dreams. The pleasure is apt to be in the waking, yet trust in Him who has so placed the stars, is the blessing of falling into the peaceful "little death" of sleep. Wonderfully meditative poem, the hymns are a praise that brings joy. Delighted. Thanks.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/03/09 at 02:51 PM

The images are so contrasting, it sets up a strange feeling but effective!!!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/03/09 at 11:45 PM

yawn, ho-hum, what's that on ye mind Brother Glenn, seems another day ending in Y...i josh, this is sooo much angst, measured-out to meet those dandelions which are really weeds...maybe that's what that fifties song, 'tossin and turnin' was all about, great write...seriously great.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/07/09 at 02:14 PM

Your writing is why I was ever drawn to poetry in the beginning. The easy smooth flow of rhyme and depth is a magnet.

The description of dream is relatable for all of us, the oddness of the barely awake moments just after? perfect.

And I like your Author's note. It contributes to this poem.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/07/09 at 03:11 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed the approach in this - most original. The author's note adds to this for me and this becomes a refreshing good vs evil drama of the mind. Thank you.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/07/09 at 07:14 PM

Brings to mind my nightmares Glenn. Well written CharMin.

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