Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/26/09 at 03:33 AM So sorry. Your joy in him of course obvious, yet it seems we rarely drink our fill when the fountain is at full force. Touching poetics. Thanks. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/27/09 at 11:53 AM I'm am saddened by your loss. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to his memory. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/27/09 at 02:41 PM You have demonstrated not only a sense of loss but of overcoming that loss in loving memory. May you continue to know God's compassionate care. |
Posted by Kris Mara on 07/27/09 at 09:34 PM the structure and words in this convey such a wonderful life and freedom...it's a beautiful tribute...and I am sorry for your loss...and I think that, in your words, others may also find some peace, which is just amazing...so thank you for sharing this... |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/28/09 at 01:42 AM Thank you for expressing so beautifully the river of your love. This is very touching to me. What a sweet, gentle tribute to Wesley. Life is so fleeting, but poets like you pause it and make its sparkle linger. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/29/09 at 05:03 PM ...reality bites and even God's reality is still misunderstood by us...so we cope and you cope well with such a misunderstanding of humanness is this tragedy...i so adore your words, they make Wesley [come] alive for me, hugs and high fives for making him a glorious legacy of your love... |
Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 10/21/09 at 11:01 PM Loving and tender...I'm sorry for your loss |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/02/10 at 02:58 AM This is a very inspiring piece. It reminded me of something sacred I used to believe in when I younger. Thank you for helping to remember a piece of myself. |