| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 07/23/09 at 05:25 PM This one is going in my favorites. I love how you have expressed this with such wonderful metaphorical imagery. Excellent! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/23/09 at 06:27 PM Love this! My husband and I have been breaking glasses and chipping dishes this week - odd gathering of shattering. One glass managed to bounce on the floor this morning without breaking. Perhaps we are on the upside of this phenomena. :)
I like how you bring in "someone else's breath". This almost feels like a gentle breeze blowing through glass windchimes, waiting for the big wind. THank you. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/25/09 at 08:57 PM This poem has left me almost speechless. It's beautiful, the analogy of glass making applied to you the human. Marvelous stuff. |
| Posted by Alicia Vann on 10/27/09 at 06:43 PM Beautiful and true. We are doing our best to break it. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 10/27/09 at 10:35 PM This precious gem is of a beauty that silences. Congratulations on POTD... |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/11/10 at 03:15 PM Life and blown glass have much in common. There is or can be far more strength than expected and yet the fragility of both can be a very real concern for all. Nice write lady. |
