| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 07/20/09 at 05:05 PM Nothing like it is there? loved the "dripping shelf" chin! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/20/09 at 06:29 PM Sounds great and it's good for you also!!! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/20/09 at 07:15 PM Of watermelon, Mark Twain said, "When one has tasted watermelon he knows what the angels eat."
'Tis true, 'tis true!
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| Posted by Christel Crews on 07/23/09 at 02:10 AM oh, this makes my mouth water!!!! i haven't had watermelon in ages and now i'm cravin' a big juicy piece :-) excellent piece! |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 07/24/09 at 09:43 PM Mmmm.... watermelonting! Great summer poem, and the dripping chin is the perfect image to close it.... d:-) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/25/09 at 12:09 PM Has my mouth watering!! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/04/09 at 01:44 AM Amen indeed. What's summer without watermelon??? We just had some the other night in fact. Excellent description in the brevity of this piece also. :o) |
