| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Wayne Tate on 06/24/09 at 01:49 AM ok- this piece is awesome. I love how you blended the physical and metaphysical into one. I also like how direct this is. It's straight and powerful. I'm so glad that I'm the first one in line to comment on it- and I guess I'm also to first one to blush. Thanks for sharing Alison :) |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/24/09 at 11:55 PM Lovely eroticism....a rarity on this site, unfortunately. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/27/09 at 01:21 PM Wow, how you capture the feeling so beautifully: "Velvet glaze /Seals delicate flesh" This piece makes me glad I am a here and can waltz with impunity into your library. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/27/09 at 06:37 PM Subtle but definitely orgasmic Alison in word choices, construction, and resulting message. :o) |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/28/09 at 05:32 AM hmmm...silkenly sensual Alison...and delightful |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/28/09 at 10:05 AM A dance of operative verbs of sensations. |
| Posted by Frank Lee on 08/25/09 at 04:29 AM Olfactory |
