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Ich wünsche... (haiku)
by Wayne TateThe shores sway divides
salted breath with sand shell eyes,
while lids beg repose. 06/04/2009 Author's Note: German title which translates to "I wish..."
Posted on 06/05/2009
Copyright © 2026 Wayne Tate
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/09 at 03:05 AM I like it. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/09 at 03:56 AM I second the motion. The best poems can evoke an emotional response while leaving the reader speechless. |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 06/05/09 at 01:28 PM it's gorgeous...the vast images this creates with so few words...really does leave a person speechless (well, you know what I mean...I just talk too much! :) ) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/20/09 at 11:26 PM Fascinating images and evocative of at least two or three feelings - and all in three lines and seventeen syllables. Lovely, indeed. |
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