Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/09 at 03:05 AM I like it. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/09 at 03:56 AM I second the motion. The best poems can evoke an emotional response while leaving the reader speechless. |
Posted by Kris Mara on 06/05/09 at 01:28 PM it's gorgeous...the vast images this creates with so few words...really does leave a person speechless (well, you know what I mean...I just talk too much! :) ) |
Posted by Quinn Vokes on 06/07/09 at 01:28 AM Beautiful, and fitting title as well. |
Posted by D. James McKee on 06/09/09 at 08:25 AM Amazing and lovely! Well done!! |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/20/09 at 11:26 PM Fascinating images and evocative of at least two or three feelings - and all in three lines and seventeen syllables. Lovely, indeed. |
Posted by A. Reed on 06/20/11 at 05:52 AM Das ist wunderbar. |