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Ich wünsche... (haiku)

by Wayne Tate

The shores sway divides
salted breath with sand shell eyes,
while lids beg repose.

06/04/2009

Author's Note: German title which translates to "I wish..."

Posted on 06/05/2009
Copyright © 2024 Wayne Tate

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/09 at 03:05 AM

I like it.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/09 at 03:56 AM

I second the motion. The best poems can evoke an emotional response while leaving the reader speechless.

Posted by Kris Mara on 06/05/09 at 01:28 PM

it's gorgeous...the vast images this creates with so few words...really does leave a person speechless (well, you know what I mean...I just talk too much! :) )

Posted by Quinn Vokes on 06/07/09 at 01:28 AM

Beautiful, and fitting title as well.

Posted by D. James McKee on 06/09/09 at 08:25 AM

Amazing and lovely! Well done!!

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/20/09 at 11:26 PM

Fascinating images and evocative of at least two or three feelings - and all in three lines and seventeen syllables. Lovely, indeed.

Posted by A. Reed on 06/20/11 at 05:52 AM

Das ist wunderbar.

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