| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 05/07/09 at 02:26 AM like this.. esp. the last two stanzas |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 05/07/09 at 05:11 AM Amen! Bring on the poems, music and dancing too! MFS |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 05/07/09 at 12:09 PM powerful statement...I think many of us can relate |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/07/09 at 02:38 PM Great work. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/07/09 at 02:48 PM You give the natural conclusion a quiet dignity. I like that a lot. Thank you. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/31/09 at 07:20 PM Thought provoking spiritual poem George. Well done! |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 06/07/09 at 01:15 AM nicely done. I want to live it out that way too.
good write --bf |
