| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/13/09 at 12:03 AM This is going in my favorites. I love this poem, Peter....it is so refreshing to read and it takes me to that place so soothing.Thank you for creating this wonderful piece. ;) |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/09 at 12:16 AM A really nice, casual piece of work. Well done, sir. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 04/13/09 at 07:06 AM This one goes straight into my dream diary, needs
to be a little longer though Peter, say.......all night. Lovely piece |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/15/09 at 04:12 AM A most inviting place, this netherland. Thank you, Peter. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/09 at 03:03 PM Quite the "out of body" experience Peter; very well described and inspirational in its own right. Congrats on hitting No. 1. Adds to favourites. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/17/09 at 01:34 PM ...peter, i had to keep changing. once i was me, then a bird o' prey-soaring/scouring[w/keen eyesight], then i'm on the beach living melife and i'm viewing it from above...lovely lilt of life in this one...revealing of a man's search for meaniing and finding it--in simplicity. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 04/18/09 at 03:42 AM Takes me back to times of my youth when I would lie in the fields outside our home in North Carolina and I would stare up at the sky at twilight and dream a little dream... Wonderful. |
