Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/13/09 at 12:03 AM This is going in my favorites. I love this poem, Peter....it is so refreshing to read and it takes me to that place so soothing.Thank you for creating this wonderful piece. ;) |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/09 at 12:16 AM A really nice, casual piece of work. Well done, sir. |
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 04/13/09 at 02:19 AM As I began to read this, I thought of the glossy illustrated pages of poetry books from childhood (and Robert Louis Stevenson in particular). Then the poem took an "adult" turn, and that seemed just right, too. Very nice, Peter. |
Posted by Tony Young on 04/13/09 at 07:06 AM This one goes straight into my dream diary, needs
to be a little longer though Peter, say.......all night. Lovely piece |
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 04/14/09 at 05:37 PM I am adding to my Fav's, this one lulls, rocks, glides me to a gentler place and I love the word choice, the rhyme, the feel of this poem. It is great to read you again and to be taken someplace so pleasant with this poem. smh |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/09 at 06:56 PM Spot on, Peter....this is a true stand-out. I'm enjoying multiple readings here, and will save this to my favs! Thanks. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/15/09 at 04:12 AM A most inviting place, this netherland. Thank you, Peter. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/09 at 03:03 PM Quite the "out of body" experience Peter; very well described and inspirational in its own right. Congrats on hitting No. 1. Adds to favourites. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/17/09 at 01:34 PM ...peter, i had to keep changing. once i was me, then a bird o' prey-soaring/scouring[w/keen eyesight], then i'm on the beach living melife and i'm viewing it from above...lovely lilt of life in this one...revealing of a man's search for meaniing and finding it--in simplicity. |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 04/18/09 at 03:42 AM Takes me back to times of my youth when I would lie in the fields outside our home in North Carolina and I would stare up at the sky at twilight and dream a little dream... Wonderful. |