| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/13/09 at 12:12 PM was anything e'er writ that rings as true as this?
backs serve so many purposes, one of which is to slap perhaps in a congratulatory manner and the other to stab in a way which is painful no matter the rhyme or the reason it is done. I think backs just want to have fun and could without either slap or stab. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/16/09 at 01:45 AM Clara, this is exceptional.... welcome to Pathetic.... I look forward to reading more.... |
| Posted by D. James McKee on 04/16/09 at 10:05 AM Apropos in the extreme. Well done! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 04/16/09 at 08:38 PM Very much said in a concise, precise and poetic well written way. smh |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/16/09 at 09:43 PM Truth in five seven five, and spoken so accurately that I have goose bumps. |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/16/09 at 09:45 PMw e l c o m e to P a t h e t i c ! |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 09/30/09 at 01:51 AM This poem spells snake. I love it. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/28/10 at 02:10 PM Reaps and sows pain for perpetrator and victim. Thanks for this cutting honest piece, Mel. |
