|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/19/09 at 08:50 AM|
This is lovely, MFS!
|Posted by George Hoerner on 03/19/09 at 01:00 PM|
Very nice m'lady. And yes, it should be enjoyed more frequently.
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/19/09 at 02:32 PM|
It sounds pretty nice. Beautiful little bit of writing here.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/20/09 at 11:41 AM|
I find fascinating, the whole notion of this poem.
Ultimately it is an ode to love.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/21/09 at 11:06 PM|
Where all are intent on the same mission.
You express the feeling of "sisterhood" of comaraderie in improving ones health.
|Posted by Mo Couts on 07/09/11 at 06:21 AM|
What a lovely poem! Yes, nothing like a day at the spa! This brings back memories of my spa experiences!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/15/15 at 03:02 PM|
Loved "bodies mapping time". You take us to our basic state and rejuvenate with your words. Congrats on POTD!