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A Pedestrian Musing

by Lacy D Phillips

I will fall in step with you, my love,
measure my gait against your own
and match you step for step.
No matter which of us possess
the advantage in length of limb,
we will arrive together.

I am no endurance runner, as you know.
Nor am I built for the sprint.
I prefer a purposeful stride,
a straight path,
and you at my side.

Or are you my destination?

02/26/2009

Posted on 02/27/2009
Copyright © 2022 Lacy D Phillips

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 02/27/09 at 01:42 PM

The destination certainly!! And to arrive is just the beginning. Good write Lacy!!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/27/09 at 01:54 PM

Beautiful write! Loved the whole piece (especially the last line) great job-

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/27/09 at 04:13 PM

I like the focus in this - it does not waver. It is full of quiet determination and devotion and I like the ending question.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/27/09 at 11:09 PM

I'm going to vote destination as well. Very nicely done.

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/02/09 at 12:36 PM

Thought provoking...I think destinations are only the transitions to new paths...

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