| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/04/09 at 07:30 PM Hey George, I'm loving the narrator's point of view of this. An unexpected action/reaction...like doing the opposite of everything...and I (IMHO) think you are on to something wonderfully philosophic, deeper than its surface indeed. Thanks. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/04/09 at 10:19 PM ...george, a kingly double entendre of intoxicating...cool and i agree w/ greg...but even at face-level, it says a lot... |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/04/09 at 10:23 PM I'll drink to that, George! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/05/09 at 01:45 AM A m e n !
w o n d e r f u l l y w r i t t e n |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/07/09 at 02:23 PM if I were e'er in need to fill my cup to the brim
and sip not quaff its elegance, then your cup is as good as any to beginning to commencing that elegant sipping. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/17/09 at 05:22 PM Really loved this one!The last 2 stanzas are outstanding! I would say "I'll dronk to that...but I don't drink LOL!) wonderful write and very enjoyable read! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/22/09 at 12:50 AM You had my mind flipping about trying not to fall into the usual beer-soaked meaning. But the flips were fun and I love the life-embrace with the punctuation of the holidays that sometimes send us to the liquid variety. Clever and thought-provoking, George. Thanks. |
