{ pathetic.org }
 

Experiment

by Vrinda Agrawal

X-ray thoughts
You feel

Look behind.

Some used
Others more

Not called.

Knowledge’s zone
People hear

Ink words.

Gone down
Every joke

Questioned reason.

02/01/2009

Posted on 02/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Vrinda Agrawal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/01/09 at 04:15 PM

Sparsely written, but still very striking and memorable.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/02/09 at 04:57 AM

That beginning line takes me in several directions and feelings. I like this experiment. Makes me edgy.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/02/09 at 09:50 PM

... exceptional.....

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)