| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/30/09 at 07:02 PM A symphony of poetry Chris....CharMin |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/30/09 at 08:33 PM Ahhh, Chris....this is just right..like the correct cord for the melody....and the (unintentional?)slant-rhyme of "ours" and "nova"
grabbed me right away. Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/31/09 at 03:06 AM A symphony of kisses - a warm, tender read. I liked the "meanwhile" segue - nice touch. Quite timeless. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 01/31/09 at 08:33 PM Total Romance. I love it. I love Leonard Cohen. In fact, I think I love you! Very nice work. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/01/09 at 02:11 PM Leonard Cohen lives inside my Zune. And, now mentioned, most assuredly I notice his influence in this Symphony of Forever. (Your vault intrigues!) |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 02/02/09 at 04:56 AM this poem IS a waltz, and with each turn, a flurry of kisses...love held in every pause, every image, every line step...a pleasure to savor love through your eyes...deserving of it's ranking on the top-rated list, kudos!...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/02/09 at 05:50 AM Missed your work, sir. This is great. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/02/09 at 10:22 PM I echo Gabriel..a stunning and emotional return, Chris! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 02/03/09 at 04:18 PM Yesterday was a day without poetry, when I went to log in I could not for some reason but then today there was this poem and it really was worth waiting for, such beauty and tenderness from an old friend, I have missed your words and nostalgic style, nice waltz and yes do dance awhile. smh. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/03/09 at 04:27 PM ...kisses, so wonderfully used, i was jealous of the kisses someone was getting by the day, and i languish with a want for a kiss...Kings want a horseshoe, i want a kiss from the Universe...good pome, my buddy, goood one! |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 02/07/09 at 05:23 PM Beautifully written, and just in time for Valentine's Day. Best wishes to you, dear friend. |
| Posted by Nancy Ames on 02/07/09 at 10:56 PM "All the world loves a lover" and here's to a true romantic - cheers! Beautifully written and structured without losing any of its heartfelt spontaneity, this is a poem to be treasured. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 02/13/09 at 05:09 PM cohen is definitely here. nice write...and congrats on a good revision. i'm never too good at that. |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/10/09 at 04:08 PM Beautiful love poem. Thanks for the kisses. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/13/09 at 03:45 PM Beautiful poem- tender and loving. I LOVED all the "kisses" good read- great write! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/30/09 at 06:57 PM Senuous and sensual and very lyrical. Poetry of the heart! |
